• ___ out (deleted)
• Added and deleted
• Added to and deleted from
• Amended
• Bettered Better Homes and Gardens, say
• Blue-penciled
• Bowdlerized
• Changed
• Changed it indeed
• Changed lines
• Checked copy
• Checked the Time?
• Cleaned up, in a way
• Corrected copy
• Corrected manuscript
• Corrected proofs
• Corrected, as text
• Cut a movie
• Cut and pasted
• Cut down, maybe
• Cut for TV
• Cut the film
• Cut, e.g.
• Cut, in a way
• Cut, perhaps
• Deled, e.g.
• Did a publishing job
• Did newsroom work
• Did work for New York
• Emulated Greeley
• Emulated Maxwell Perkins
• Exchanged words?
• Fixed a manuscript
• Fixed, in a way
• Got ready for print
• Got to work on Time
• In deed, it was revised
• In final form, as a film
• Like some copy
• Made a long story short?
• Made corrections to
• Made corrections to newspaper articles, for example
• Made typo-free
• Made typo-free, e.g.
• Polished prose
• Polished up People
• Polished, as text
• Prepared a text
• Prepared copy
• Prepared for press
• Prepared for print
• Prepared for printing
• Prepared for publication
• Put in final form
• Readied for print
• Readied for the printer
• Ready for publication
• Ready for typesetting
• Ready to be put to bed
• Ready to be typeset
• Ready to print
• Redacted
• Reduced a sentence perhaps
• Rephrased
• Revised a manuscript
• Revised, as copy
• Rewritten, perhaps
• Righted writing
• Served Time?
• Shortened a sentence, maybe
• Shortened, as a law review article
• Shortened, as prose
• Spliced film
• Spliced film, etc.
• Spliced, e.g.
• Tidied up text
• Trimmed text
• Trimmed to fit
• Trimmed to fit, say
• Used a blue pencil
• What Teddie did at the mag
• With revisions
• Worked on a film
• Worked on a Life sentence?
• Worked on a paper
• Worked on copy
• Worked on galleys
• Worked on, as a newspaper article
• Worked over Time
• Worked the blue pencil
• Worked with People, maybe